A long time ago a dragon was unleashed unto the world, the Necro Eclipse Dragon. This dragon brought nothing but death and destruction in its wake. However, an unknown warrior appeared and sealed the dragon within a necklace, and locked it a temple to be guarded. As time moved on, it was forgotten and no longer played as an impact in peoples lives. So left in the temple forgotten, it stayed there for 100 hundred years before it was disturbed again... The village Bakura lived in was a peaceful one, his best friends Naomi and Kairi, they were 7 years old and without a care in the world. There was nothing in the village that caused trouble. Bakura started having dreams of some entity that was calling him, luring him away... After a couple of nights he started hearing the voice during the day. Curious of voice, he was lured to it, bringing him to a temple. He entered the temple, scared, but still wondering what it was. (This part were are still working on[how he finds the necklace]). Finding the necklace he put it on and felt some sort of rush through his body and the voice ceased immediately. Ignoring this he went back to the village. A couple of days went by, no one really paying much attention to the necklace. Naomi, however being a bit jealous, came wearing a necklace made by here sister with a beautiful red jewel on it... Later that night Bakura woke up hearing shouting and racket outside his house. He went out and saw houses on fire and people tied up by a group of bandits. Seeing his friends and family tied up, he ran up to one punching him. They had no effect and he just kicked Bakura to the side. Bakura came back at him with a broken wooden plank he found and beat it into the man, this of course causing some damage. Enraged by this, the man pushed him back and slashed down a sword, and it slashed his right eye. Bakura fell down, writhing in pain. The man still not satisfied walked up to Bakura and picked him up by the neck, he slammed him into a wall while slowly choking him to death. Bakura feeling hopeless and in pain lost consciousness, the man still choked him intending to kill him... All of a sudden Bakura reached up and grabbed the man's wrist that was choking him and began to crush it. Then with the other hand, Bakura pulled back and punched the man in the face and sent him flying back. When Bakura looked up his eyes were crimson red and he had a blood-thirsty grin on his face. With blinding speed he began to slaughter the bandits, smiling the entire time... When all of the bandits were dead his eyes faded back to brown and he fainted on the ground. When he came to, he was on the ground and there were villagers behind him shouting “Leave Demon”. Bakura had no idea and had no memory of what he did the previous night. They then began throwing stones at him and he took off out of the village to a hill underneath a tree. He sat there wondering what happened last night and why the villagers hated him. He then heard someone shouting his name behind him, it was Naomi and Kairi. They came up to him and explained what happen, not afraid of him because they knew it wasn’t him who did that but a demon in his body. He had no idea what was inside him only thinking of if the necklace caused it… They left him with a (still working on what it is) and said goodbye, knowing it might be the last time they see him. There he was left on his own, to fend for himself, and to let his anger foster against the villagers while figuring out what was inside him for the next 5 years...
So please let me know your opinion on it so far so I can figure out if the beginning is working out so far.